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The given charts present information on the distribution of oil resources across different regions of the world and the proportion of oil consumption in those regions.

The given charts present information on the distribution of oil resources across different regions of the world and the proportion of oil consumption in those regions.
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The bar graphs give information about how much percentage of
oil
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 is reserved
as well as
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 how much
oil
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 is consumed in different parts of the world every year.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the largest amount of
oil
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 is reserved in the Middle East
while
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 other regions hold relatively far less of it.
However
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, Asia, the USA and Western
Europe
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 consume the highest amount of
oil
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. Regarding the percentage of worldwide
oil
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 resources, the Middle East holds the biggest share of
oil
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, with 56.52 %. Canada is in second place, with 14.84 %. The figure for continents,
such
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 as Central and South America, Eastern
Europe
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 and Africa does not exceed 10 % in total,
whereas
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 other areas hold a negligible quantity of
oil
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. Turning to the usage of
oil
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 on an annual basis, Asia and the USA take a lead, with 26.21 % and 25.48 %, respectively. Just under a fifth of
oil
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 is consumed by Western
Europe
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, which follows by the USA and Asia. Even though the Middle East reserves most
oil
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, it consumes only 6.15 %, which is quite close to the percentage of Central and South America and Eastern
Europe
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, at 6.70 % and 6.56 % each. Other remaining places consume a negligible amount of
oil
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 not exceeding even 4 %.
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