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The percentage of people accessing news from 4 sources from 1995 and projection to 2025

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The graph shows how many people are approaching new information from 4 distinct sources over the period of 30 years .
It is clear that
while
 the Internet is forecast to see a considerable evolution with the
number
 of citizens who access news, a steady decline has been predicted by radio and newspapers.
In addition
 , the figure
of
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 TV tends to fluctuate. On the one hand , there was a slight increase of about 2% in the
number
 of citizens accessing information from the Internet in 2000.
However
 ,a significant extension of roughly 56%
which
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is expected in the figure
of
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Internet
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 over the period of 25 years starting from 2000.
Besides
 , having expanded by about 2% in 2010, the
number
 of people accessing news from TV decreased steadily by roughly 11% . After that the year 2025 have the ability will be witnessed a gradual downward trend to 50% .
On the other hand
 , in 2020 the quantity of human approaches information by radio and newspapers
have
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 seen a significant drop of 20% and 27% compared to the figures in 1995 , respectively.
Additionally
, the year 2025 is predicted to continue to drop to roughly 20% and 29% in the
number
 of individuals accessing news from radio and newspapers, respectively.
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