The table shows how much water is used in three sectors in 6 countries.
The table illustrates information about
water
consumption in six different Use synonyms
countries
for various purposes. Use synonyms
Overall
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it is clear that
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countries
used Use synonyms
water
for farming more than in other fields. Use synonyms
However
, the lowest proportion of Linking Words
water
is spent on local needs. As can be clearly seen that Russia, Turkey and Canada achieved the highest Use synonyms
water
usage in agriculture at 1863 m3, 1482 m3,1238 m3 respectively. Next came the UK, Use synonyms
China
and Australia, with consumption lower than 810 m3 each for agriculture activities. Regarding industries, 832 m3 and 731 m3 of Use synonyms
water
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is
used by Canadians and Turks Change the verb form
are
accordingly
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whereas
less than 400 m3 of Linking Words
water
was used in the UK and Australia. Use synonyms
In
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Countries
countries
, Use synonyms
such
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China
and Russia used less than 70 m3 each. Use synonyms
Finally
, approximately 350m3 and 280 m3 of Linking Words
water
, are used for domestic needs in two Use synonyms
countries
, Australia and Canada respectively. Use synonyms
On the other hand
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China
and Turkey used Use synonyms
water
below 100 m3, Use synonyms
while
only 38 m3 of Linking Words
water
was used by the UK and 26 m3 by Use synonyms
China
.Use synonyms
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