The table shows how much water is used in three sectors in 6 countries.

The table shows how much water is used in three sectors in 6 countries.
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The table illustrates information about
water
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consumption in six different
countries
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for various purposes.
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it is clear that
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countries
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used
water
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for farming more than in other fields.
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, the lowest proportion of
water
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is spent on local needs. As can be clearly seen that Russia, Turkey and Canada achieved the highest
water
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usage in agriculture at 1863 m3, 1482 m3,1238 m3 respectively. Next came the UK,
China
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and Australia, with consumption lower than 810 m3 each for agriculture activities. Regarding industries, 832 m3 and 731 m3 of
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is
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used by Canadians and Turks
accordingly
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,
whereas
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less than 400 m3 of
water
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was used in the UK and Australia.
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countries
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such
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as
China
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and Russia used less than 70 m3 each.
Finally
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, approximately 350m3 and 280 m3 of
water
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, are used for domestic needs in two
countries
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, Australia and Canada respectively.
On the other hand
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,
China
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and Turkey used
water
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below 100 m3,
while
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only 38 m3 of
water
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was used by the UK and 26 m3 by
China
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.
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