The line graph shows the number of trips to other countries by UK residents for various purposes between 1989 and 2001

The line graph shows the number of trips to other countries by UK residents for various purposes between 1989 and 2001
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The graph illustrates the figure for overseas trips experienced by British people for a variety of reasons from 1989 to 2001.
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, the most popular purpose for travelling abroad was to go on holiday in the period given, that was about 30
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in 1989 and gradually increased until approximately 50
million
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in 1998, after which it decreased to under 40
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in 2001. In the first year, travelling for business was done below 10
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and remained constant during the period.
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, family visits and other purposes were about 5
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in 1989 respectively, resulting in more than double the number of family visits,
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other purposes dropped to the point of a third
at the end
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. Looking into the total number, it started from the lowest figure in the first year which was 47
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overseas trips and steadily increased reaching the highest number of 73.5
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in 1998, after which it fell to 61
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trips.
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