The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
the pie charts illustrate the proportion of men and women
workers
in nation A and nation b.
overall
, both countries have a majority of males
and females working in services
. remarkably, in country b, only a meagre percentage of workers
are recorded in agriculture.
to begin
with, in the country , over 55% of males
work in services
, which is 2 times higher than that in the agricultural sector, accounting for 29%. the proportion of men workers
in the industry reaches 15% in comparison with only 8% in terms of females. furthermore
, the figure for women working in services
and agriculture make up 49% and 43%, respectively.
in country b, the category of services
heads the list with 65% of males
and 49% of females. however
, the number of women workers
in agriculture is by far the least important, taking up 1%, compared with 3% of men workers
. the proportion of female employment in industry in this
nation is 11%, which is nearly 3 times lower than the figure for males
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