Now adays the surveillance is happening at almost all public places. is it good or perceived bad by people? what are the advantages and disadvantages?

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With technological advancement, Artificial Intelligence (AI) system becomes stronger and stronger marking their footprint in almost each and every sector as it is being used by
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to local governments for varied purposes. One of its purposes is
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in public places by the government or concerned individuals which is perceived better by many people, including myself as it is advantageous for varied reasons.
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, the cameras installed on roads, and
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of different public premises
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as malls, gardens, schools, library, etcetera enables monitoring of the safety and security of the citizens from any unsaid theft.
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, specific intelligent cameras installed at the traffic signals are helping the administration to keep checks on traffic violations to levy penalties on the defaulters which is an added benefit for enforcing the regulations for road safety.
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country like India, it is not permitted to express your feelings in public as it is considered against the rudimentary culture that impacts negatively on younger persons ,especially children.
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in the public domain helps to restrict
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kind of activities and maintain the obedient culture of Indian society. It is a boon for the police department that always lacks reliable pieces of evidence for justice, but
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problem of developing
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, untampered shreds of evidence for any crime. With the said merits,
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at public locations is considered good for the city and its citizens.
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, there are a set of people who believe that it is
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its fewer disadvantages. Considering the fact, it may showcase wrong interpretation
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breakdowns or faults in the system as it is IT-enabled and
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sometimes one cannot completely rely on it to take major decisions. On top of that, there is a threat of data leaking which may hinder one’s privacy and safety.
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, these situations can be avoided by strengthening the systems.
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, considering both scenarios, it can be concluded that at any point
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is good and more advantageous for people
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public places.

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