In some countries, if people need to find work, they have to move away from their families and their friends. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is a fact that migration become a trend
for
nowadays . Everyone Change preposition
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want
a good life and value in society so today Change the verb form
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i
would like to highlight both advantages and disadvantages of a given topic.
On the positive side , it is good to be independent if Change the capitalization
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people
find work in other countries
they work for themselves to fulfil daily needs and cover their expenses by
their own so parents get less burden. Change preposition
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Moreover
, people
learnt about a new cultures
and adopt different environments which helps to improve their knowledge Correct the article-noun agreement
new cultures
a new culture
as well as
communication skills. In addition
to this
, people
tackle with
different tasks and activities Change preposition
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it
makes Correct pronoun usage
which
more
attractive and creative towards new things . It Correct pronoun usage
them more
make
Change the verb form
makes
people
more hardworking and valuable.
In contrast
, there is no garden without weeds if it moving to other countries
for jobs have a upteem
advantages . At the same time, there are Correct your spelling
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also
some disadvantages . First of all, it is very hard to find a job in other countries
especially which one is getting overpopulated in this
case people
get lack of
opportunities for jobs and they suffer from financial difficulties which cause mental illness which Change preposition
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forcesthem
to commit suicide Correct your spelling
forces them
for example
, in Brampton students commit suicide because their expenses are more than income,Secondly
it causes homesickness. Lack of interconnection with parents causes a complication and emotional effects.
To put it in a nutshell, after discussing both pros and cons of both sides, i
have come to the conclusion that the advantages overweight the disadvantages because in today's Change the capitalization
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value for money so to achieve money Correct article usage
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people
need a job if we get it from other countries
than it is better to move to other countries
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