Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter : Suggest how you could help her in her home.  Say why you would like to do this work.  Explain when you will and will not be available.

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Mrs, Barrett, I am writing
this
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letter
beacause
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because
one day I saw an advertisement regarding
work
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for a couple of hours in summer. I
am
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apply
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live
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in
same
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area where you live. I want to confirm some things.
Firstly
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, what type of
work
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in your home like
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responsibilities
what
i
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do in your home.
Secondly
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, I want to like
work
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in your home because it is
eassy
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easy
for me because my house
not
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far and I will manage
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according
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to my taste.
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, I want to tell
which
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days
i
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will be available. I can
work
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from Monday to Friday or one thing is that hours will be up to you.
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Your
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faithfully, Manpreet Kaur
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