Write a letter to the hiring manager. In your letter Say why you are applying for this international position Describe the job you are currently doing for the company Tell him/her why you think you will be good at the job

Dear Manager, My name is Manpreet Kaur. Yesterday I saw your
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regarding
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am apply
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this
job because I am
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hard working
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person and I understand very easily . My current job is
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a supervisor
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in
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company where
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do my responsibilities like, how to
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start and how to manage all staff
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one most important thing is that
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also
do
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make
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of
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workers's
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. I think I will be
good
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fit
in
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this
role because I meet all the
requirement
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. Yours faithfully, Manpreet Kaur.
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