The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonate drinks. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pictures highlight the steps necessary in the production of carbonated drinks.
Overall
, the process of making carbonated drinks involves five stages, from Linking Words
water
cleaning to packaging and delivery to the supermarket.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, in the first stage, the raw Linking Words
water
is pumped into a Use synonyms
water
filter to remove unwanted substances. Afterwards, a Use synonyms
water
softener is used to remove some particular minerals from the Use synonyms
water
. Use synonyms
Then
it was chemically treated before being passed onto a pump.
In the second stage, it is first heated by electric heaters and Linking Words
then
goes through a cooling pipe into the tank Linking Words
that is
pumped with carbon dioxide to produce the carbonated drink.
Later, Linking Words
this
carbonated drink is pumped into a mixing tank where colouring, syrup, and flavouring are combined. Linking Words
Finally
, at the final stage, the finished mixture is packaged into boxes and delivered to the supermarket.Linking Words
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