You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Madhur Bathla I saw an advertisement in Times Magazine ( Australia) regarding the role of handling your
six year old
child, and I would like to showcase my interest towards the job offered. Since I was a teenager I Add a hyphen
six-year-old
had
always enjoyed the company of children, there are a lot of kids in my Wrong verb form
have
nighbourhood
who often visit my place to meet me. Correct your spelling
neighbourhood
Moreover
, I have a friendly bond with each one of them and they too enjoy my availability around them. I carry
Verb problem
have
a
5 years of rich experience Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
of
running a day care. Change preposition
in
Also
, I was a full time
teacher at a kindergarten in Queensland where I had been employed Add a hyphen
full-time
from
the Change preposition
for
last
ten years. However
, due to
my relocation to Sydney
I am exploring the job opportunities down here. In my free Add a comma
Sydney,
space
I tend to go for a walk in the park and meet new people. Add a comma
space,
In Addition
, I am a yoga enthusiast, I conduct virtual yoga sessions over the weekends. However
, I am planning to initiate such
sessions with the local crowd of Sydney too, but I am still exploring the city. I look forward to hear
from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Madhur BathlaChange the verb form
hearing
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
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