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The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentages of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.

The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentages of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.
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The charts illustrate the proportion of
books
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 borrowed by the residents in four village libraries from the month of June to September in the year 2014 and the percentage of
books
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 taken
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 category.
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, the highest number of book borrowers came from Ryeslip and Sutton wood village,
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 the lowest was from West Eaton and Church Mount. In terms of specification, Fiction is the most borrowed, followed by biography, Science, History, and Self-help which is the least. The line graph depicts that in June, in Ryeslip village, about 300 people borrowed
books
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, which was the highest, a steady downward trend was observed in the following months ending at the lowest point (roughly 160). Sutton wood (the second highest) in June at about 250, the figures fluctuate between 100 to 300 (only in
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 area had experienced both a sharp drop and increase), reaching the peak at approximately 300 by September. Meanwhile, West Eaton and Church Mount share a similar trajectory from 50, rising to an estimated 150 after four months. Turning to the type of
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, 43% of readers had taken Fiction stories,
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 less than one-fifth of the total percentage choose Biography. On the hand, History and Science both garnered the same per cent (14),
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 one-tenth for Self-help.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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