GRAPH SHOW THE CONSUMPTION OF FISH AND SOME DIFFERENT KINDS OF MEAT IN EUROPEAN COUNTRY BETWEEN 1979 AND 2004.
The graph presents the consumption of fish,
lamb
, beef and chicken
in a European country over twenty-five years (1979-2004). Overall
, we can see a great change in eating habits where chicken
and beef switched positions and lamb
and fish had the more consistent behavior
. In 1979, 60 Change the spelling
behaviour
grams
of fish were consumed and in 2004, after falling slightly, it remained steady and ended the period in
48 Change preposition
with
grams
. Beef was the most consumed in
the beginning of the period, around 225 Change the preposition
at
grams
per week, but after some fluctuation, after 1994 it dropped sharply to 110 grams
, finishing in second place. When the research began, lamb
and chicken
were almost equal in consumption values (150 grams
per week), however
Add a comma
however,
lamb
declined while
fluctuating over the years and in 2004 the average consumption was 60 grams
, while
chicken
consistently moved up and finished in 250 grams
, the highest of all. To conclude
, it is possible to see that there has been a significant change in the pattern of two of the four main sources and chicken
became the number one, maintaining a considerable advantage in comparison with others.Submitted by Nayara on
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