Write a letter to the television channel Manager about boring programs during the day time. Tell him about the programs, give suggestions.
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter regarding the films that are being broadcast every morning. I find your shows really interesting however
the storyline remained the same for the last
two months.
I really enjoyed watching compelling films ,especially the ones that are sentimental. It makes me want to watch some more due to
its complicated story however
, viewers are getting bored if they watch films like this
over and over again. Nevertheless
, I would like to give probable shows that other people might enjoy as well. There are various programs that I would like to suggest such
as game shows or comedy shows. You could put comedy movies every after the morning news to ease the tension from other people. The majority of people enjoy programs that can make them laugh so it will be better if you add those types of programs.
I hope this
letter reaches you and thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Rhea EmanoSubmitted by ieltspractice on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite