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some people think its better to choose friends who always have the same openion as them. Other people believe its good to have friends who some time disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own openion.

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Choosing a
friend
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 is a challenging task . It is commonly agreed by some people that it is preferable to select
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 who will always have identical opinions as them. Others feel that it is much better to find
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 who often have an opposite opinion. In
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 I will discuss these
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 views, and I will explain, why in my opinion it is always better to combine
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 types of
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 in your circle of
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. Having a
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 with the same taste in different fields of interest,
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 as food, fashion, hobbies, or lifestyle, will help to develop a type of relationship
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 unique and rare, which
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 sides can enjoy and find a safe place without arguments, as the saying goes: "Great minds think alike". for ,example teenagers will have a better connection, with a
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, that thinks like them, and they will easily share their deepest secrets with someone they can relate to, rather than someone who disagrees with them and they are having a lot of conflicts
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. But
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, it has been said in the past, that opposites are attracted to each other, and I agree with it. I believe that
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 who don't think always alike can contribute to themself enormously, than people who share the same thoughts. Having a wide range of opinions helps
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 to learn how to be
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 others, and
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 enriches the knowledge of
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 sides. People who work in a team, do not always agree with each other points of view, it is common to
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 among the team members a brainstorming - a discussion that helps to increase the level of creativity, or problem-solving,
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, brainstorming helps to
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 other team members to diverse ways of thinking, or even different ideas without being disrespectful to one another. In conclusion, it is known that socializing and creating
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 is a work of art. Finding a good
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 is often complicated, especially in a world that communicating is usually done behind screens. I deeply believe that it is important to combine a
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 since it can only contribute to a person's social development.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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