The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors’ contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors’ contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts compare and contrast the contribution of 8 main economic sectors of Turkey’s economy in two years, 2000 and 2006. The data is calibrated in percentages. From an
overall
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perspective, it can be seen that during the period some colossal changes happened.
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, was no longer the biggest sector and it was overtaken by health and education
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, which in fact, remained the same. Getting back to details, in 2000 agriculture represented almost one-fourth of the total. And it was twice as big as the government industry. Leisure and hospitality and healthcare and education accounted for the same proportion at 17%,
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trade, utilities and transportation were slightly smaller. The other there sector
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represented comparatively
smaller section of the country’s economy. In terms of 2006, healthcare and education accounted for 17% making it the biggest sector, followed by trade,utilities and transportation with just 1% lesser. Government, manufacturing and construction represented almost equal values, 9%, 12%, and 10% respectively,
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leisure and hospitality both were 14%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Contribution
  • Percentage
  • Sector
  • Economy
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Notable
  • Trend
  • Period
  • Agriculture
  • Industry
  • Construction
  • Healthcare
  • Education
  • Trade
  • Utilities
  • Transportation
  • Finance
  • Business services
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