The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peae. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

That's obvious for everyone that nuclear
weapons
have lots not only cons, but
also
pros.
For
this
reason, lots of
countries
, especially during the wars always threaten their enemy with nuclear
weapons
(probably to manipulate, though). But
inspite
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in spite
of its deadly impact on
people
, nuclear
weapons
have
number
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a number
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of positive
influence
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influences
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on Earth.
Firstly
, it
generate
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generates
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big amounts of
energy
.
For instance
,
countries
that have big amounts of radium can generate big amounts of
energy
. As an example, Kazakhstan can get lots of radium thanks to its geographical placement, but
this
country uses its
recources
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resources
in a
posotive
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positive
way, not aiming to kill
people
, but in order to generate
energy
.
Secondly
, in some cases (not often) nuclear
weapons
remain world peace, because of
its
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deadly impact, as I mentioned before. But
due to
this
reason, it can influence
countries
, and keep wars away.
Although
,
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sometimes
countries
prefer to use them, and in
this
case
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it can kill millions of
people
and the area would be inhabitable for decades. As it happened during
world
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the world
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war
,
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when America through nuclear
weapons
on
Hirosima
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Hiroshima
and Nagasaki. For its lethal influence on
people
, or even on nations I do not think that
advantages
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of nuclear
weapons
outdo its disadvantages. Of course, I do not oppose the idea that it has diverse
kind
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kinds
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of pros, but its cons are
enermous
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enormous
. Nuclear
weapons
are the most dangerous and
threating
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threatening
type of
weapons
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not only because
of
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its
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it's
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a joke or something else. It can finish
lives
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the lives
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of the whole nation.
To sum up
, for the reason above I tend to
diagree
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disagree
with
this
stament
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statement
, even though radium
have
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really
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good impact on
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the manufacture
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manufacture
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manufacturing
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and
energy producing
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energy-producing
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fields of the
countries
.
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  • Reliability
  • Efficiency
  • Greenhouse gases
  • Mitigate
  • Air pollution
  • Cost-effective
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  • Radioactive waste
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