Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

A generation ago, protecting to

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was considered

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extremely well-respected and important and it is still a major subject in some countries.

However

, there has been a sharp drop in the number of animal species around the world and suddenly they have been extinct for the behaviour of humans on the plan.

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essay will look at the reasons for

this

and propose some solutions. One of the main causes of the

problem

is that most

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do not take serious rules against the people who damage the

ecosystem

. We have

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more than a million miles of forests and

inhabitant

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inhabitants

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by

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important animal species that have a crucial role in our

environment

. Just in Australia

for example

, some jungles have been fired because the tourists do not care about guidance. The solution for

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is that sign some especially laws about people who want to visit the national parks and intact places and so on. Another issue is that pupils in the schools do not read about

this

. If we have some new courses in our education about

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, the lifestyle of the next generation will be changed and protection of the habitat would seen as a culture in many parts of the world. So the way forward for

this

problem

is that students should learn about

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and the important role of animals in saving it. The third cause of the

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these days, the

media

morely

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attention to new make-up, fashions and celebrities rather than teaching

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people how to think and behaviour about

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the environment

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,

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the ecosystem

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and climate change,

while

actually they really do not care.

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has an important role to remake our culture.

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issue could be addressed by

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social

media

, televisions channel and even radio station managers because they could use their powerful tools and

then

you can see what will happen. All things considered,

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personally

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I believe due the reasons

such

as

government

laws, educating children and caring for

media

about our

environment

,

last

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species and

ecosystem

will suffer more and the most

responsive

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for solving the

problem

lies with humans and the

government

.