Some believe that new science related to criminal forensics should be used to look at old cases. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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been changing so fastly for

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of years and some people argue that these new improved machines should be used in criminal forensics for looking

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accidents. İ am fully

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with that statement. First of all, there are several unsolved

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immediately because the matter is our lives here. These criminal forensics are connected to

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, gambling and

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of these kinds of crimes among those

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acts should be punished definitely because they make massive harmful impacts on others' lives.

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, they can find someone to marry them .

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do not think a child who

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risen up with these type of uncanny parents , can be suitable for normal communities. To summarize , in my point of view , those new advanced technological machines or gadgets should be used for looking at the old

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. Because those people who are not penalized for their crimes ,

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can cause more dangerous

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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