Some believe that new science related to criminal forensics should be used to look at old cases. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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been changing so fastly for
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of years and some people argue that these new improved machines should be used in criminal forensics for looking
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accidents. İ am fully
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with that statement. First of all, there are several unsolved
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and those criminals who committed these crimes are walking around us. Actually ,
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should take
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immediately because the matter is our lives here. These criminal forensics are connected to
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.
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, İt would be easy for them to open old
cases
and search them again. Another reason is there are
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, gambling and
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lots
of these kinds of crimes among those
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, people who have carried out one
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acts should be punished definitely because they make massive harmful impacts on others' lives.
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, despite all their awful
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, they can find someone to marry them .
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do not think a child who
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risen up with these type of uncanny parents , can be suitable for normal communities. To summarize , in my point of view , those new advanced technological machines or gadgets should be used for looking at the old
cases
. Because those people who are not penalized for their crimes ,
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can cause more dangerous
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influences
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • forensics
  • accuracy
  • guilt
  • innocence
  • uncovering
  • evidence
  • investigation
  • analysis
  • reliability
  • ethical concerns
  • high costs
  • re-evaluating
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