It is the responsibility of schools to teach children good behavior in addition to providing formal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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have been educated about not only academic knowledge but

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. It is believed that institutes are responsible for teaching good

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students

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giving formal education. From my perspective,

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opinion is reasonable to a certain extent and I will explain my viewpoint in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, the protesters of the topic in question have their rational grounds.

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the majority of

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at schools

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spent on providing compulsory for pupils

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of teaching others skills. In fact, it takes a long

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for teachers to convey a large amount of academic knowledge of all subjects to

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. In Vietnam, a significant number of

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suppose that they are

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because of too many subjects so they lack

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to learn other skills.

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educating

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should belong to the responsibility of their parents.

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is because parents are able to spend much

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their kids at home and they are

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people who are the closest

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children

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.

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, it is pretty simple for parents to teach their

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how to behave well with old people and others on a daily basis.

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, the above arguments are insufficient to overshadow the merits of said matter. The most pertinent point is that educating

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good

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and valuable academic insights will help

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develop comprehensively. In reality, many

students

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mostly pay attention to doing exercises at school

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of cultivating essential soft skills.

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, they are short of many crucial factors to have a successful career in the future

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companies are finding out employees who have good

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before training them. Another justification is that education institutes should decrease unnecessary subjects to teach

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students

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good

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which are essential for all of them before coming to a higher level in their life. To elaborate,

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right attitude is the foundation of their growth and will help them avoid mistakes in the future. In short, educating pupils

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behaviour

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is highly crucial for their development in the long run.

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should be responsible

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all adults , particularly schools.