The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the
percentage
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of different types of post-school
degrees
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in Australia in 1999. some small changes
Overall
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, it's clear that males were more likely to achieve higher
degrees
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,
while
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undergraduate
diplomas
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and bachelor’s
diplomas
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illustrate the opposite situation.
Also
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, there are significant differences between the qualification levels owned by
men
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and
women
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on the skilled vocational diploma. On average, the largest gap in the proportion between
men
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and
women
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is approximately 80%. Postgraduate
diplomas
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and undergraduate
diplomas
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take up the second largest
percentage
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of the distance, about 40% respectively. It is noticeable that the
percentage
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of
men
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who processed the postgraduate qualification of roughly 40% more than
women
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.
By contrast
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,
women
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, who were at the undergraduate level demonstrated a proportion of about 40% more than
men
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. Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that the
percentage
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of Bachelor’s
degrees
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shows little difference between the different sex, and
men
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owned over twice as much
percentage
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in postgraduate
degrees
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.
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