The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the
percentage
of different types of post-school degrees
in Australia in 1999.
some small changes
Overall
, it's clear that males were more likely to achieve higher degrees
, while
undergraduate diplomas
and bachelor’s diplomas
illustrate the opposite situation. Also
, there are significant differences between the qualification levels owned by men
and women
on the skilled vocational diploma.
On average, the largest gap in the proportion between men
and women
is approximately 80%. Postgraduate diplomas
and undergraduate diplomas
take up the second largest percentage
of the distance, about 40% respectively. It is noticeable that the percentage
of men
who processed the postgraduate qualification of roughly 40% more than women
. By contrast
, women
, who were at the undergraduate level demonstrated a proportion of about 40% more than men
.
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that the percentage
of Bachelor’s degrees
shows little difference between the different sex, and men
owned over twice as much percentage
in postgraduate degrees
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