The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
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The bar chart provided highlights the percentage of
households
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who owned or rented their residences in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
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, the percentage of families that rented accommodation outweighed families in their own accommodation before 1971. After that, the trends went opposite that the amount of owning a house raised,
in contrast
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, the number of renting houses dropped. To be specific, in 1918, almost 78% of families chose to rent residences, and only 22% of
households
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owned residential properties. After that, the proportion of owning a house dropped significantly.
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, the number of renting a house raised to 50% in 1971, as same as the former proportion. Over the next four decades,
households
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in owned accommodations experienced an upward trend and peaked at roughly 70% in 2001, and dropped about 2% in 2011.
On the other hand
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,
households
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in rented accommodation witnessed a downward trend, reached a notable low at 31% in 2001, and
then
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increased to around 7% in 2011.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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