The charts below show the Internet use in different perposes in Australia in 2010,2011 and the percentage by users .Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
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The bar charts illustrate the various targets of
Internet
users in Australia between 2010 and 2011.
It is noticeable that most Australians used the Internet
to send and receive emails in 2010 and 2011. In addition
, the percentages based on the user's age of paying bills online and social
media are the same.
It can be seen that the number of people who suffered from the Change preposition
on social
Internet
and send
emails peaked at about 70%. Meanwhile, the demand to use social media and online payment is less popular, at only about 49% and 50% respectively.
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percentage, almost all users aged 18 to 25 surf Add a hyphen
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Internet
for social media, Correct article usage
the Internet
while
people aged around 65 use less, only 30%. In contrast
, about 80% of browsers 65 years old to
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apply
to
send emails. Fix the infinitive
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In addition
, the proportion of people in
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year
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years
olds
who browse the Correct your spelling
old
Internet
for three purposes, approximately
71% to 77%.Add a missing verb
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