You wish to apply for a new college course, but you are unsure about the details of cost, duration and subjects posted on the college website. Write an email to the relevant person in admissions at the college, asking them to clarify these points for you. In this email, Say what your interest is Explain why the website is unclear Request the information that you need Begin your letter 'Dear --------

Dear Sir, I am John Smith, living at flat 1, 536, Firest Road, Canterbury 2036. I am writing to you with regard related to new courses provided by your
university
in the upcoming sessions. First of all, I completed my studies in the accounts stream and would like to do a Chartered Accountant
course
from Sheffield Hallam
University
in the UK because no other
university
provides
this
course
.
Also
,
this
university
has a professional staff.
Moreover
, I search for
this
course
on the
university
website hallamcourse.co.uk but was unable to find out in-depth information. On
this
website
this
course
only showed under professional courses and when click on that
course
new blank page was opened.
Finally
, I would really appreciate you if you provide all the information related to
this
specific
course
, namely the duration of the
course
, fee structure, starting date and
also
the subjects covered in each semester with the training period. Please send all the detail of the
course
to my email [email protected]. If you require any information from me please let me know directly through email ID. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, John Smith
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