The pie chart shows women in poverty in the United States and bar chart compares poverty rates by gender.

The pie chart shows women in poverty in the United States and bar chart compares poverty rates by gender.
The pie chart depicts data about
woman
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woman's
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poverty
in the US and the other compares
poverty
rates in both two genders.
Overall
,
it is clear that
numerous single women faced financial difficulties.
Moreover
, The
poverty
rates in all woman age groups
was
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larger than those in men. Looking at the first graph, the primary characteristic was single females. Single women without dependent
children
acounted
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accounted
for 54%, which was the biggest in all categories.
Following
this
, the component of females with dependent
children
was almost half of
individuals
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the individuals
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with no
children
. (26%) The
remainings
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remaining
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, which are married
one
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ones
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with or without
children
consisted of 12% and 8% respectively.
Furthremore
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Furthermore
, women in all generations had
poverty
problems more than males
although
certain groups in both
gender
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genders
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had similar percentages.
For instance
, until
turing
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turning
to be 17 years old, both rates were almost
same
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the same
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and reached
high
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a high
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of around 20% in
under
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those under
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5 and 17% in 5-17.
However
,
after
this
period, between
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Vocabulary: Replace the words poverty, children with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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