The pie chart shows women in poverty in the United States and bar chart compares poverty rates by gender.
The pie chart depicts data about
woman
Change noun form
woman's
poverty
in the US and the other compares poverty
rates in both two genders. Overall
, it is clear that
numerous single women faced financial difficulties. Moreover
, The poverty
rates in all woman age groups was
larger than those in men.
Looking at the first graph, the primary characteristic was single females. Single women without dependent Change the verb form
were
children
acounted
for 54%, which was the biggest in all categories. Correct your spelling
accounted
Following
this
, the component of females with dependent children
was almost half of individuals
with no Add an article
the individuals
children
. (26%) The remainings
, which are married Fix the agreement mistake
remaining
one
with or without Correct pronoun usage
ones
children
consisted of 12% and 8% respectively.
Furthremore
, women in all generations had Correct your spelling
Furthermore
poverty
problems more than males although
certain groups in both gender
had similar percentages. Change to a plural noun
genders
For instance
, until turing
to be 17 years old, both rates were almost Correct your spelling
turning
same
and reached Correct article usage
the same
high
of around 20% in Add an article
a high
under
5 and 17% in 5-17. Correct pronoun usage
those under
However
, after
this
period, betweenSubmitted by ryohei.1015.golf on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words poverty, children with synonyms.
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