The pie charts below show the compariso of different kinds of energy production in a country in two years

The pie charts below show the compariso of different kinds of energy production in a country in two years
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, we can analyze a comparison that was made between distinct
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production
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methods. First of all, we can clearly see that two graphs are shown, the first one is from 1995, and the second one is from 2005. In the first
graph
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, we can see that the
energy
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with the largest
production
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was coal, with
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29.80% of all the
energies
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compared, followed by gas representing 29.63%, making
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method of
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the second most significant value on the
graph
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. After these, follows petro with 29.27%,
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nuclear
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with
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6.40%, and
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but now not least go other
types
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of
energies
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. After taking a look at the results from 1995, we can compare and contrast them with the results from 2005, where we can see some really interesting features.
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, it can be noted that the rankings of
energy
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that
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produced
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the most amount in their respective years,
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exactly the same in both graphs, the order being; coal, gas, petrol, nuclear, and
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the other
types
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of
energy
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which are not specificated on the
graph
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.
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, among that huge similarity, we can see that nuclear
energy
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production
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rose by
aproximately
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approximately
four
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. Not only
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,
however
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the other
types
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of
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energies
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energy
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also
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were affected having an increase in their
productions
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production
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. The three
types
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of
energy
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that had a bigger
production
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over the years, stayed being the most influential ones,
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, we can see that their percentage suffered a fall,
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the increase of the other
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. In conclusion, we can see that the
production
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of
energy
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did not
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from any changes over the years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, energy, production, energies, types with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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