The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
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men
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group 35-44 illustrated the least rate.
The youngest age
category (15 to 24) was the only one in which men
did more exercises than women
, almost 53% compared to 47,7%. However
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showed the biggest difference in comparison with males (39,5%), by 13%.
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Finally
, the percentages of active Australian men
and women
in the oldest section (65 and over) were almost identical, at approximately 47%.Submitted by fgadzievaa on
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