You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months • say how your work could be done while you are away • ask for his/her help in arranging it

Dear Mr Smith,
This
is Ella Khin, HR Manager from Carousell Myanmar Branch. I am writing to express my interest in the opportunity to work in our head office in Singapore for about six months. I would like to get
this
short-term transfer for several reasons.
To begin
with, it would be a great experience in my career to explore the working atmosphere in a developed country.
Also
, I will be able to tighten the relationships with our HR Team which I have been working together virtually.
Moreover
, it is
also
beneficial for the local branch not to provide the living expenses for me as my husband has been working in Singapore already.
However
, I am well aware of the manpower
need
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of
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my position during the period
while
I am abroad. I would like to recommend you
to
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consider my assistant as an eligible person to cover my duties under my online guidance.
Additionally
,
this
will
also
be a chance to present her performance and accountability. I hope you will be of my help in arranging
this
transfer process since
this
is very productive for all. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Ella Khin
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional advancement
  • cross-cultural collaboration
  • headquarters/ head office
  • global perspective
  • remote work
  • temporary assignment
  • team dynamics
  • networking opportunities
  • cultural immersion
  • succession planning
  • collaborative tools
  • time zone coordination
  • corporate hierarchy
  • relocation logistics
  • work-life balance
  • multinational environment
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