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Because of traffic and housing problems in the cities, the government encourages businesses to move the rural area. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

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These days, the government encourages businesses to move to the cityside area because of increasing
traffic
 jam
problems
 and less space for housing. I partially agree with the statement because only the government can solve
traffic
problems
 in the city areas. If
a small and big businesses
Correct the article-noun agreement
a small and big business
small and big businesses
show examples
 will be in rural areas
then
 it decrease
traffic
problems
.
For example
, if a
person
 has any kind of medical emergency
then
 it will be less chance of him to be stuck in
traffic
 jams.
Additionally
, air
pollution
 can decrease in cities because of minimum vehicles,
as well as
 noise
pollution
,
as well as
 noise
pollution
also
 decline.
Furthermore
, working
people
 can get maximum free space of land to build houses and flats.
Besides
 the advantages, there are some drawbacks that more fuel require to reach their places.
For example
, if a
person
 has his factory in a rural area
then
 he has to travel more every day to reach his location so the use of fuel will increase for
business
 class
people
.
Additionally
,
business
 institutes far from a house can
also
 time consuming to reach
as well as
 it
also
 enhances transportation costs.
According to
 a recent, survey
people
 can feel more fatigue when their businesses are very far from their homes and a
person
 starts decreasing interest in his field so outcomes and thinking abilities will decline and it will affect his
business
 and the nation's economy.
To conclude
, fewer
traffic
problems
 reduce air and noise
pollution
 in the city areas and help
people
 to reach their places as soon as possible.
However
, it is difficult for a
person
 to travel every day in the
business
 field.
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