Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
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map shared an extensive description of the development of the
village
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, Chorleywood that located near London and how
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grew steadily over one century and a half from 1868 to 1994. It is clearly noticeable from the map's description that the
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population grew to cover almost three-quarters of the location after a century later.
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, two new transportation infrastructures : a railway and a motorway were added in the later
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of the period in question. Between the
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1868 to 1883, only a small number of occupants were residing in the centre of the
village
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near the city park and golf course area.
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, within the next forty
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, the area experienced an expansion to the southeastern of the road that runs from north to south of the
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. In 1909, a railway was built across that road and a Chorleywood train station was built. Over the following five decades after 1922, a large area to the south of the railway track was
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filled up with more villagers.
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of that period, in 1970, a motorway was laid out in the east and crossing over the east-west road with a roundabout. Almost 25
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after 1970, the entire eastern part of the
village
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is occupied by new dwellers.
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  • village
  • population
  • increased steadily
  • middle of the nineteenth century
  • development
  • location
  • factors
  • contributing
  • physical
  • infrastructural
  • effects
  • conclusion
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