Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
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This
map shared an extensive description of the development of the village
, Chorleywood that located near London and how it's
population Correct your spelling
its
has
grew steadily over one century and a half from 1868 to 1994.
It is clearly noticeable from the map's description that the Unnecessary verb
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village
population grew to cover almost three-quarters of the location after a century later. In addition
, two new transportation infrastructures : a railway and a motorway were added in the later years
of the period in question.
Between the years
of
1868 to 1883, only a small number of occupants were residing in the centre of the Change preposition
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village
near the city park and golf course area. Subsequently
, within the next forty years
, the area experienced an expansion to the southeastern of the road that runs from north to south of the village
. In 1909, a railway was built across that road and a Chorleywood train station was built.
Over the following five decades after 1922, a large area to the south of the railway track was then
filled up with more villagers. At the end
of that period, in 1970, a motorway was laid out in the east and crossing over the east-west road with a roundabout. Almost 25 years
after 1970, the entire eastern part of the village
is occupied by new dwellers.Submitted by MS Tha on
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