More and more companies allow their employees to work from home or “remotely” rather than going into an office each day. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?
With the recent advancement to the internet, we have made major changes to almost every aspect
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, a growing number of companies are letting their employees Correct your spelling
which
work
from Use synonyms
home
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instead
of coming to their offices every day. In Linking Words
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work
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outweight
its disadvantages.
Distraction and a negative impact on social life are the major drawbacks of remote Correct your spelling
outweigh
work
. At the office, everyone is focused Use synonyms
at
what they are doing but at Change preposition
on
home
distractions Use synonyms
such
as pets and kids will affect the employee's output. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the inability to interact with coworkers face to face drastically impacts social life. Those at Linking Words
home
miss out on the office culture and events, Use synonyms
for instance
, which makes them Linking Words
feels
distant. Isolation creeps in which is detrimental to their mental health being, and Correct subject-verb agreement
feel
further
leads to depression.
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However
, remote Linking Words
work
means fewer cars on the road and Use synonyms
as a result
, improved air quality. Automobiles are the leading cause of air pollution. With the Linking Words
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work from
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work-from-home
home
option growing, cars on the roads have decreased and so have burnt up Use synonyms
fossile
fuels. Correct your spelling
fossil
Besides
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it's
positive environmental impact, it Replace the word
its
also
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possitively
affects the employee's life. They are able to spend more time with their families and are able to partake in activities that would be impossible if they spent their entire day at Correct your spelling
positively
work
. Missing their child's first step, Use synonyms
for instance
, is no longer a worry for those who Linking Words
work
remotely.
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To conclude
, remote Linking Words
work
is a new Use synonyms
conecpt
that has its valid negatives but its Correct your spelling
concept
benfits
outweigh them. Correct your spelling
benefits
This
mode of Linking Words
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affects its Use synonyms
employees
lives and provides them with happiness, something Change noun form
employee's
employees'
that is
invaluable to a company's morale and productivity.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...