The diagram below show the stages in the production of bricks.

The

strcture

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structure

below illustrates the

production

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stages

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of brick manufacturing.

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, the

bricks

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production

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do consist of seven

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. In

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essay, we can summarize the

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for

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two

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separate

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types. From collecting raw clays from

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to packaging and transporting the moulded

clay

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for local hardware stores.

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, the

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starts with a massive mechanical digger which digs

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from the earth. The

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clay

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to a roller

which

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consist

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of a metal grid to filter the pure

clay

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from the

digged

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dug

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clay

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dirt.

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, in the third

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the

clay

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is added with water and sand and

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the

mixuture

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mixture

to a brick moulder.

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will be the first part of the

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which

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of three

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.

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, the moulded

bricks

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will be placed in a drying oven to

strenghthen

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strengthen

the

bricks

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.

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the

bricks

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will be transferred to cooling chambers to be cooled up to

atleast

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at least

two to three days. The

bricks

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will be

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packed and

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for the delivery

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where a transportation truck would taken to transport

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local hardware stores.

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, the

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only takes seven

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to complete a brick in the

production

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process

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which illustrates a simple manufacturing

process

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of moulding

of

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bricks

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and packaging it to be transported.