The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates the proportion of households using electrical devices and the amount of time spent doing housework in households in a particular country from 1920 to 2019. The units are measured in percentage and
hours
per week.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the washing machine is the highest proportion at the start and it has been overtaken by vacuum
cleaner Correct article usage
the vacuum
at the end
of given
period, Add an article
a given
the given
while
the remaining devices rose sharply throughout over
the year. Change preposition
apply
Additionally
, the number of hours
of housework in a week per household decreased throughout over
the years.
In 1920, most of Change preposition
apply
people
in a particular country had Add an article
the people
washing
machine, which is respectively four out of ten of families, Add an article
a washing
while
having refrigerator
is the lowest at the start. Refrigerators and vacuum cleaners stood at 30% and about 2% respectively in 1920. Add an article
a refrigerator
Moreover
, washing machines experienced a jump to 70% in 1960 before falling to approximately 62% in the next two decades. Additionally
, it increased until the end of the given period and reached a peak of just above 70%. Contrary, refrigerators rose sharply throughout the period and it
reached a peak of 100% in 1980 and stayed the same in the next two decades. Correct pronoun usage
they
Whereas
, the vacuum cleaners increased dramatically over the years, then
reached a peak of 100% in 2000 and remained relatively stable until the end.
Furthermore
, the hours
spent doing housework by household stood at 50 in 1920. It fell dramatically into
around 15 Change preposition
to
hours
per week in 1980, then
stayed the same until 2000 before experiencing a slight decrease.Submitted by mdelvega90 on
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