The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates the proportion of households using electrical devices and the amount of time spent doing housework in households in a particular country from 1920 to 2019. The units are measured in percentage and
hours
per week.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the washing machine is the highest proportion at the start and it has been overtaken by Linking Words
vacuum
cleaner Correct article usage
the vacuum
at the end
of Linking Words
given
period, Add an article
a given
the given
while
the remaining devices rose sharply throughout Linking Words
over
the year. Change preposition
apply
Additionally
, the number of Linking Words
hours
of housework in a week per household decreased throughout Use synonyms
over
the years.
In 1920, most of Change preposition
apply
people
in a particular country had Add an article
the people
washing
machine, which is respectively four out of ten of families, Add an article
a washing
while
having Linking Words
refrigerator
is the lowest at the start. Refrigerators and vacuum cleaners stood at 30% and about 2% respectively in 1920. Add an article
a refrigerator
Moreover
, washing machines experienced a jump to 70% in 1960 before falling to approximately 62% in the next two decades. Linking Words
Additionally
, it increased until the end of the given period and reached a peak of just above 70%. Contrary, refrigerators rose sharply throughout the period and Linking Words
it
reached a peak of 100% in 1980 and stayed the same in the next two decades. Correct pronoun usage
they
Whereas
, the vacuum cleaners increased dramatically over the years, Linking Words
then
reached a peak of 100% in 2000 and remained relatively stable until the end.
Linking Words
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
hours
spent doing housework by household stood at 50 in 1920. It fell dramatically Use synonyms
into
around 15 Change preposition
to
hours
per week in 1980, Use synonyms
then
stayed the same until 2000 before experiencing a slight decrease.Linking Words
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