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Women play quite different role in society than twenty years ago. They make career growth, earn money, drive cars and spend less time with their children. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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In recent years, in the modern world, the female population has had a bigger input in the social, economic, and political
life
 of countries.
While
 it brings huge benefits to families and societies, to some extent, it is harmful to them. On the one hand,
women
 today have more rights to participate in essential processes in the world. Undoubtedly, they can have a much more versatile
life
 and be an active member of society than before. It is common knowledge that modern
women
 have good career growth, earn higher salaries, and improve the standard of living for their families. In fact, they open doors to more opportunities,
such
 as travelling during holidays, shopping in better stores, giving their offspring a chance to get a better education, and so forth.
On the other hand
, children struggle with loneliness
due to
 their working mothers, and they feel neglected.
As a result
, they spend more time on their own and are more likely to be involved in bad companies,
as well as
 having worse performance in their studies. Obviously,
women
's initial roles as mothers and carers are significantly altered. Mothers maintain a strained lifestyle and play men's roles, which is unnatural for them.
Moreover
, in
this
 way, they serve as a bad role model for daughters and may contribute to an unhappy
life
 in the future. In conclusion,
women
's active functions create a range of favourable circumstances for them and their families.
However
, they should keep a golden middle, manage to enjoy true values in
life
 and devote sufficient time to their children.
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