According to some people, it would be better if industries are established in regions outside the urban area. Discuss its advantages and disadvantages.
More and more people are advocating for shifting of
industries
from the city
area
to the outskirts of it since it is playing pivotal
role in spreading pollution across the metro Add an article
a pivotal
area
. Relocating them to a remote place from the city
has certain benefits along with
few
drawbacks. Both its pros and Correct article usage
a few
the
cons are explained in the following paragraphs.
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apply
To begin
with, more and more industries
are occupying space in metropolitan area
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and as
result
people are now finding Add the comma(s)
,result
hard
to find a suitable place to live in a Correct pronoun usage
it hard
city
. Moreover
, they are forced to live near hazardous industrial are
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area
that
is the primary reason for Correct pronoun usage
which
detoriating
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deteriorating
health
of many.Correct article usage
the health
Furthermore
, ecosystem
is one Add an article
the ecosystem
an ecosystem
the
most adversely affected Change preposition
of the
are
owing to rapid industrialization. To Unnecessary verb
apply
examplify
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exemplify
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the numbers
numbers
of sparrows has reduced to its extinction in a decade Fix the agreement mistake
number
due to
heavy industries
.
Replacing industries
to
the periphery Change preposition
in
area
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of a
city
will certainly reduce pollution that
is the prominent reason for many diseases in cities. If the industry is established in Correct pronoun usage
which
village
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are
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apply
than
more people Replace the word
then
form
the same village and Correct your spelling
from
near by
villages can get employment. It would be beneficial for the company itself as the cost of land outside Correct your spelling
nearby
city
is less as compared to Add an article
the city
city
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the city
area
and as a result
their capital investment can be saved for another operation of company
. Add an article
the company
a company
For instance
, Tata motors
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Motors
has
purchased a huge piece of land Change the verb form
have
in
the outskirts of Ahmedabad that has saved Change preposition
on
their
300 crores rupees which they invested in Correct pronoun usage
apply
training
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the training
of
freshers.
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apply
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conclusion, Change preposition
In
Although
, an
industrial revolution has made our life Correct article usage
the
simplier
than ever, there have been Correct your spelling
simpler
few
consequences Correct article usage
a few
such
as green house
effect that cannot be ignored.relocating companies from the Correct your spelling
greenhouse
city
place to a village is not only beneficial for the
human beings but Correct article usage
apply
also
for the whole ecosystem.Submitted by robinmacwan on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
