the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six years of the world.
the given charts reveal the percentage of using
water
for various aims (industrial, agricultural and domestic adoption) in six different part of the world, namely: North and South America
, Europe, Africa, Central Asia and
South Asia.
It goes without saying that there is a trivial difference between these areas. for
example, in North America
and Europe the most rate of use
refers to industrial usage
whereas
,in other parts, the most percentage refers to agricultural usage
. the former,the agricultural usage
is less than industrial usage
with the same domestic usage
. Even though the latter, the agricultural use
of water
is considerably more than domestic and industrial use
. In these parts (South America
, Africa, centra;l and Southeast Asia), there is a trivial difference between industrial and domestic use
of water
however
in North America
and Europe, there is remarkable diversity between the percentage of industrial and domestic use
of water
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