The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of
visitors
to UK
and visits abroad by Correct article usage
the UK
UK
citizens
between 1979 and 1999. On the other hand
, the bar chart also
represents the most popular country where UK
residents liked to visit during 1999.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the number of visitors
to UK
increased gradually and the figure for Correct article usage
the UK
UK
residents who visited other countries was higher than the visitors
to Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
UK
. Correct article usage
the UK
However
, France was the most popular country than Turkey where UK
citizens
tended to visit .
In terms of the line graph, there was an increase in the number of overseas residents to UK
almost Correct article usage
the UK
at
50 Change preposition
apply
millions
in 1999 Change to singular
million
whereas
in 1979 it was up to at
10 Change preposition
apply
millions
. the figure for Change to singular
million
visitors
to UK
rose gradually from 20 million to 40 million between 1984 and 1994 respectively.
In the table, most Correct article usage
the UK
UK
citizens
visited to
France and it was over 10 Remove the preposition
apply
millions
Change to singular
million
while
Turkey was up to under 5 millions
. Spain was another popular country and the number of Change to singular
million
UK
citizens
had to almost 10 millions
. The figure for USA and Greece remained the same almost between 4 Change to singular
million
millions
and 3 Change to singular
million
millions
respectively.Change to singular
million
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