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The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
#line #visits #uk #bar #countries #residents
The line graph illustrates the proportion of
visitors
 to
UK
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the UK
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 and visits abroad by
UK
citizens
 between 1979 and 1999.
On the other hand
, the bar chart
also
 represents the most popular country where
UK
 residents liked to visit during 1999.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the number of
visitors
 to
UK
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the UK
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 increased gradually and the figure for
UK
 residents who visited other countries was higher than the
visitors
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number of visitors
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 to
UK
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the UK
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.
However
, France was the most popular country than Turkey where
UK
citizens
 tended to visit . In terms of the line graph, there was an increase in the number of overseas residents to
UK
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the UK
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 almost
at
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50
millions
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million
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 in 1999
whereas
 in 1979 it was up to
at
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10
millions
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million
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. the figure for
visitors
 to
UK
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the UK
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 rose gradually from 20 million to 40 million between 1984 and 1994 respectively. In the table, most
UK
citizens
 visited
to
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France and it was over 10
millions
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million
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while
 Turkey was up to under 5
millions
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million
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. Spain was another popular country and the number of
UK
citizens
 had to almost 10
millions
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million
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. The figure for USA and Greece remained the same almost between 4
millions
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million
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 and 3
millions
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million
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 respectively.
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