Health services are the basic necessity for a person. Private companies have make the health services quite costly for ordinary individuals. Do the advantages of private health care outweight its disadvantages.
Health
services
has
improved over the period of time and it is an important necessity for a person to live a happy life. Change the verb form
have
Privatization
of health
care has helped to improve the quality
and delivery of services
to all people. Private companies
have increased the cost
of services
gradually and this
has created a financial burden for ordinary individuals. This
eassy
will discuss Correct your spelling
essay
easy
about
advantages and disadvantages of Remove the preposition
apply
privatization
of Correct article usage
the privatization
health
services
.
Quality
of Correct article usage
The quality
health
services
provided in the
developed and developing countries has improved Correct article usage
apply
due to
privatization
. Private companies
can able to invest more on
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in
health
care infrastructures and attract good quality
health
care staffs
by providing competitive salaries. Fix the agreement mistake
staff
For example
, private companies
can go public by listing in stock
market and get more funds from investors for development. Good Add an article
the stock
quality
of health
services
has saved many life and made people to
live longer.
The Change the verb form
apply
cost
of private health
services
are
increasing every year Correct subject-verb agreement
is
due to
an
inflation and Remove the article
apply
this
has caused huge financial implications in
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for
middle class
families. Private Add a hyphen
middle-class
companies
are increasing the cost
of services
to sustain in market
and to satisfy their Add an article
the market
share holders
. Correct your spelling
shareholders
For example
, private companies
trading in stock
market need to show Add an article
the stock
profit
every Add an article
a profit
quater
to attract more investors. As Correct your spelling
quarter
health
services
are the
basic necessity and Correct article usage
a
middle class
families are not able to avoid Add a hyphen
middle-class
this
financial costs.
In conclusion, Correct determiner usage
these
privatization
of Correct article usage
the privatization
health
services
has improved the quality
of services
but with
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at
huge
Add an article
a huge
cost
. Getting the
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apply
quality
health
services
has more advantages eventhough
it has created Correct your spelling
even though
financial
Add an article
a financial
burden
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burdens
in
some ordinary individuals.Change preposition
for
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...