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The chart below shows the percentages of people accessing news via different media in one country in 2013, 2015, and 2017. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentages of people accessing news via different media in one country in 2013, 2015, and 2017. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who had
access
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 to
news
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 by using various
media
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 devices in one country in three distinct
years
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 2014, 2015 and 2017.
overall
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, in all mentioned
years
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 a majority of people had an opportunity to watch the
news
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 on TV
whereas
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, in the latest
years
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, internet devices could come close. Meanwhile, two other
media
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 namely printed newspapers and radio witnessed a particular decrease over time.
Access
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 to
news
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 on tv showed a slight fluctuation starting with 80 per
cent
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access
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 for the population and declining by about 12 per
cent
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 in the next couple of
years
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 and experiencing an increase to more than 70 per
cent
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. Internet devices for
news
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 had the fewest
access
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 with about 32 per
cent
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however
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 it managed to rise gradually in the first two
years
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 by 10 per
cent
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 and in 2017 rocketed to close to 70 per
cent
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 which is compatible with Television.
In contrast
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, the other two
media
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 experienced a decline,
access
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 to newspapers had about 40 per
cent
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 and throughout the period it gradually decreased to approximately 21 per
cent
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 in the end.
On the other hand
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, radio was the most stable
media
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 among the four companies starting with more than 30 per
cent
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access
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 ended with a slight decrease to about 30 per
cent
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words access, news, media, years, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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