Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society.’ Discuss.

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Nowadays, we are all becoming aware of the fact that children are more disrespectful to their parents compared to the past.

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behaviour shows the value

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given by their parents.

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with, I would like to understand what is “respect” for anyone. It is talking properly or in a manner, listening to them all over the time, or never arguing with them I would

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like to mention that

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notion of respect was prevalent with older generations.

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, my mother used to narrate that she always has to listen to her mother irrespective of the fact that she believes in it or not. As per her,

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is her respect towards her mother.

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perception stands as a distorted perception among

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generation. Regarding someone is something

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demanded not only by elders but

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by younger ones as well. In today's era, ‘Respect” is not only open to abiding by what elders say,

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, you can give your viewpoint and

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agree to disagree.

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, I am open to giving my opinion about what I feel when I talk to my father. I have an environment where I can give my opinion and

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take my own decision.

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is not considered as any act of disrespect. Yet,

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is considered as a negative impact on the community as the people are stuck with the older perception of appreciation. In conclusion, our community should develop in

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a way that everyone gets a chance to put their opinion in a respectful tone irrespective of their age.

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will help to build a better nation where children will automatically learn to give their regard when they receive appreciation.

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Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society.’ Discuss.

Your opinion

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