the graph below shows the percentage change in the number of international studentsgraduating from universitiesin different Canada provinces between 2001 and 2006

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graduating from the universities in 8 different places in the Canadian province between the years 2001 and 2006. New Brunswick in the

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2001,had about 6.5% of

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that graduated from the University and in 2006 there is an increase in the total number of graduates in the University. In Nova Scotia in 2001 about 6% of graduating

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were produced from college

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in 2006,10.5% graduated from school. Quebec had 6% of scholars graduating from

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2001,in 2006 there was a hick in the production of

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by 10.5%. Alberta had less than 5% of learners in the

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2001 and in the

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2006

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2001, British Columbia produced less than 5% of

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,and an increase in 2006. Manitoba had less than 4% in the

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2001 and there is an increase in the number by 2006. Newfoundland and Labrador, Ontario had 4% and 4.5% respectively and in 2006 the University graduated 6.5% and 5.5% respectively. In conclusion,in 2001 there had been

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in the statistic of graduating international

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the graph in the 8 provinces,

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there has been an uproar in the sum of graduating international scholars in 2006.