Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think it is important for children to go to school. Discuss both the advantages of each method and give your own opinion.

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development, many people

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that children

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better to learn at home but some people

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that it is still necessary to go to

school

. Both

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have cons to

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the progress of

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growth

amd

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and

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sides can still support a young one.

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, the advantage of home-schooling gives

opportunity

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for children to learn by themselves because they are curious about all

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things and they can have their own space.

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, the parents can assist them

for

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every

questions

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they want to ask and things they want to learn. It is a combined

ideas

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from a parent and a child to create ideas to gain knowledge.

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the importance of going to

school

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, they will learn to socialize to build up confidence.

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getting

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help of

proffesional

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professional

teacher

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teachers

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to monitor their performance by giving them activities,

quizes

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quizzes

, and

assignment

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assignments

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to know what

the

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strength and

weeknesess

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weaknesses

weakness

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Additionally

, recognizing their work at

school

by awarding and giving medals will make them motivated more to study at

school

. In my opinion, going to

school

is much better than learning at home because it is more limitless and children can explore more with plenty of books and computers that

provided

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. It is

also

the training

of

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them for the real world to know what

is

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the best career will have in the future. In

this

direction

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they will experience the different lessons and understand the value of life. To end, the kids should

have

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a participation in

face to face

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classes with others because

in

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this

way, they can practice

them selves

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themselves

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for being independent as long

as

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with the guidance of parents.

Also

, Having a presence at

school

is more likely to have a friend that can support and make memories.