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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think it is important for children to go to school. Discuss both the advantages of each method and give your own opinion.

#people #children #home #child’s #development #school #method
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 development, many people
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 that children
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 better to learn at home but some people
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 that it is still necessary to go to
school
. Both
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 have cons to
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 the progress of
child's
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 growth
amd
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and
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 sides can still support a young one.
Firstly
, the advantage of home-schooling gives
opportunity
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 for children to learn by themselves because they are curious about all
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things and they can have their own space.
Also
, the parents can assist them
for
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 every
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 they want to ask and things they want to learn. It is a combined
ideas
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 from a parent and a child to create ideas to gain knowledge.
While
 the importance of going to
school
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, they will learn to socialize to build up confidence.
As well as
 getting
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 help of
proffesional
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professional
teacher
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teachers
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 to monitor their performance by giving them activities,
quizes
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quizzes
, and
assignment
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assignments
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 to know what
the
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 strength and
weeknesess
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weaknesses
weakness
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Additionally
, recognizing their work at
school
 by awarding and giving medals will make them motivated more to study at
school
. In my opinion, going to
school
 is much better than learning at home because it is more limitless and children can explore more with plenty of books and computers that
provided
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. It is
also
 the training
of
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them for the real world to know what
is
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the best career will have in the future. In
this
direction
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 they will experience the different lessons and understand the value of life. To end, the kids should
have
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a participation in
face to face
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 classes with others because
in
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this
 way, they can practice
them selves
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themselves
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 for being independent as long
as
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with the guidance of parents.
Also
, Having a presence at
school
 is more likely to have a friend that can support and make memories.
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