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You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter.

#friends #restaurant #occasion #food #service #manager
Dear Arun, My name is Manpreet Kaur, I am from India .
Last
 week I and my friends visited your restaurant to celebrate my birthday.
This
 is the first time, I am coming to your area and I was very happy because of your services. On that day,
firstly
 we cut the cake and your staff played a birthday song for me . After ,that we ordered snacks,
for example
: butter naan, goat curry and some other drinks. The cooking was very delicious and the setting arrangement was
also
 good . The meal was not too spicy it was medium flavour. One thing a liked in your restaurant was a sitting arrangement . The tables and chairs were brown in colour and different types of shadows on the walls it is look like a beautiful painting. Before coming here, we checked the reviews about your fare and everyone said the bread is very tasty and
also
 the staff is very nice . I am very thankful to you offered
this
 beautiful service. I will tell other people to visit your restaurant and enjoy the bread. Yours regards, Manpreet Kaur
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