Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Children

's free time activities have become a very debatable topic over the years, which divides peoples' opinions into 2 two groups. The first one

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is those who believe that any activities should be supervised by adults,especially parents.

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the second one is convinced that

children

should have the opportunity to choose the activity,which they want to practice. For those who have thought that activities during the free time of

children

should be organized and supervised by parents, the reason they do so is because of the fear that

children

may be in danger or have incredible

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that adults can not

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accidentally preserved the development of creativity and thinking of the

child

On the other hand

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for self-playing

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can stimulate creativity in each

child

and help them develop

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way of thinking and not, but without parent monitoring, they will take

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of a loss of

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, it is important to

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what your

child

is doing ,but it is more vital to give them the space ,which will allow

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a chance to experience the world from their view.