Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Freelancing is a thing to be done out of passion. These days many individuals like to be
self effaced
rather than to make Add a hyphen
self-effaced
effort
in a firm. The possible reasons Correct article usage
an effort
of
what might be the issue are substantiated in the below paragraph. First of all, there are some categories of citizens Change preposition
for
where
Correct word choice
who
they
like to toil themselves but not in any company. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Consequently
, they will plan for their own startup. They want to follow their own zeal or legacy sometimes. The
highly ambitious nature Change the word
Their
make
them Change the verb form
makes
to
do so and Change the verb form
apply
keep
them going. Correct subject-verb agreement
keeps
For example
, many billionaires in the world like Mark Zuckerberg and Bill Gates etc., followed their
own footsteps and achieved many big outcomes and became Change preposition
in their
one
of the
famous personalities. Correct article usage
apply
This
utilization of their self motivation
and dedication becomes Add a hyphen
self-motivation
one
of the reason
Change to a plural noun
reasons
to
the major step in life. The possible disadvantages Change preposition
for
also
prevail along with
the above situation. To state one
of them,
will be preparing themselves strong enough to face any failures or downfall. Monetary capacity should be outrageous. Remove the comma
apply
Moreover
, no self-care or personal vacation time is available. If at all there is no patience, then
there is a direct effect on the wellbeing
of the business organization. Good wage and on-time salary can’t be expected. Correct your spelling
well-being
For instance
, some of the well known
entrepreneurs faced a lot of hurdles because of ineffective marketing, lack of research and not being an expert in the industry. To summarize, choosing between self-employment and Add a hyphen
well-known
job
is highly debatable. Self-work is less safe and carries with it many challenges. Correct article usage
a job
One
need
to follow their aspiration with good money. Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
Hence
, it has its own respective disadvantages like not a
lump sum wage and because of defective/deficient research and Add a missing verb
having a
idea
into the business, there is Fix the agreement mistake
ideas
high
chance of non-successAdd an article
a high
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion