Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?”

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debts
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have become a serious problem among some
people
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. the increasing number of
people
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who take
loans
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to fill their wants by buying
things
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they don't need and won't able to pay for.
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will present the causes behind
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manner including aiming for
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to have fancy
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and
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mimicking
celebrities
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.
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will suggest solutions to maintain
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problem including the role of government and increase the awareness of
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nowadays,
people
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are willing to have a fancy
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by buying expensive houses
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they are aiming to copy
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'
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by buying unaffordable clothes they don't even need them. because some
people
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are possessed by showing off in front of their friends, they burden themselves by getting into
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.
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, many
people
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from the middle class take
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from
banks
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with huge interest to just buy a fancy house and unwanted
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which leads to spending their
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either paying off their
debts
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or ending up in jail as they are not able to pay back their
loans
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.
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, taking
debts
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to just purchase
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that are needed is a big issue. Would increasing awareness of
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help? if they were
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management tv programs, ppl would make up their mind properly before they get into
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to just mimic beloved
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banks
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should investigate before allowing ppl to take
loans
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and put criteria to identify who needs
debts
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to buy a house. for ,example some
banks
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require their customers to fill out a paper to show what required
debts
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and
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make a decision whether to give them
loans
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or not. to sum ,up the more increasing ppl's awareness of their
money
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the less
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will be given to them and
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banks
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have to make sure they land the right
people
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. in conclusion, getting into
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debt debt
because of purchasing wanted
things
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that are hard to be affordable is a big issue.
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presented that having rich
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and buying mimic
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'
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leads to having
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problems.
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suggested solutions to maintain the problem, teach
people
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how to manage their
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and
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banks
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should make the right decision before land
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's
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