The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.

The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.
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The
line
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chart demonstrates the different ways that people request information from
January
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to
June
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at a tourist office in the United Kingdom. The
requests
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for data can be sent in person, by letter or email and, by telephone. The
overall
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view of the chart starts with the three lines on a similar location and as the months pass by, the blue
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increases shockingly,
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the green
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that represents the
requests
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by telephone has a rising, on the country, the red
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that
are
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they
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requests
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by letter or email has a decrease. As we take a closer look
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the
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graph,
they
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the
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requests
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by person,
showing
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in the blue
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, went up from 400 in
January
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to almost 2000 in
June
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.
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the red
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had a higher number in
January
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being
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800 and went down to 200 between May and
June
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. The most stable
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without a doubt was the green one.
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number between 800 to 1000 for four months and having a rise after reaching 1600 in
June
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. All
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this
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requests
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for information or data are being managed by the tourist office in the United Kingdom, counting a mostly certain number of
the
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people who ask in person, by letter/email, and by phone. The data is measured from
January
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to
June
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 91%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words line, january, june, requests with synonyms.
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