The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.
The
line
chart demonstrates the different ways that people request information from January
to June
at a tourist office in the United Kingdom. The requests
for data can be sent in person, by letter or email and, by telephone.
The overall
view of the chart starts with the three lines on a similar location and as the months pass by, the blue line
increases shockingly, as well as
the green line
that represents the requests
by telephone has a rising, on the country, the red line
that are
they Change the verb form
is
requests
by letter or email has a decrease.
As we take a closer look Change the verb form
request
on
the Change preposition
at
line
graph, they
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the
requests
by person, Change the verb form
request
showing
in the blue Wrong verb form
shown
line
, went up from 400 in January
to almost 2000 in June
. While
the red line
had a higher number in January
being
800 and went down to 200 between May and Unnecessary verb
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June
. The most stable line
without a doubt was the green one. Mantaing
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Maintaining
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it´s
number between 800 to 1000 for four months and having a rise after reaching 1600 in Replace the word
its
June
.
All this
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these
requests
for information or data are being managed by the tourist office in the United Kingdom, counting a mostly certain number of the
people who ask in person, by letter/email, and by phone. The data is measured from Correct article usage
apply
January
to June
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