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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand , other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opininon.

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Whether or not to complete
university
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a university
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education
 is becoming increasingly controversial.
While
 some
people
 argue that a
university
 degree is vital to secure a good
job
, there are others who believe that it is better to have
experience
 and soft
skills
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both views and explain why I feel that
university
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a university
show examples
education
 is essential for academic jobs,
whereas
experience
 and soft
skills
 are more useful in business. There are
number
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a number
the number
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 of
people
 who believe that being a graduate is a key to
secure
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securing
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 a good
job
. Having a tertiary degree put
people
 one step ahead of others who do not and
this
 can be the deciding factor in getting a quality
job
.
For example
, there are many jobs like law, medicine or teaching where higher
education
 is necessary.
Number
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A number
The number
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 of students who are enrolling
into
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on
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 universities
are
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is
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 increasing every year and
this
 shows how important
this
 level of
education
 is for
people
's future work opportunities.
On the other hand
, some
people
 think having work
experience
 and soft
skills
such
 as leadership
skills
 and other interpersonal
skills
 is essential. For many positions there are an overwhelming number of applicants and,
therefore
, it is often thought having a relevant
experience
 in that line of work or having acquired useful
softskills
Correct your spelling
soft skills
 that can be valuable to a company, can put one ahead of the game when applying for a
job
.
Need
Correct article usage
The need
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of
Change preposition
for
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 higher
education
 to secure a
job
 is debatable.
People
 are divided over whether a
university
 degree is required to get a satisfactory
job
 or
experience
 and soft
skills
 are more important.
This
 essay discussed both views and explained that getting a good
job
 requires a
relevent
Correct your spelling
relevant
 background either in
experience
 or
education
 based on the line of
job
.
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