Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution, and airport construction. Some people say that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, It is known that people started travelling by
Air
transport frequently for many reasons, due to
which it has raised noise
, pollution, and airport buildings. There was an argument about whether the government should impose heavy taxes to reduce air
traffic
. Let us discuss the points in the below paragraph.
One of the biggest air
traffic
effects is noise
disturbance. Due to
this
, the birds and people living nearby will affect
by it. Later Wrong verb form
be affected
this
will impact more human life and it may lead to disorder of the human parts. For instance
, if any prolonged patient lives nearby chance it gets affected more due to
the noise
of the air
traffic
.
Additionally
, the polluted air
that comes out from the air
traffic
will impact a lot in the environment. Oxygen and carbon dioxide will get impure due the air
pollution. For example
, this
will create a breathing problem due to
contamination of the air
. This
is
a serious impact on the human race. Verb problem
has
Furthermore
, it will get more complex by building the airport construction. To build the construction, the nature
has to be demolished. These things will affect nature
and climatic conditions in the coming days.
I agree to apply a high tax considering the noise
, pollution and airport building. Due to
,this
the government reduce air
traffic
in the coming days. To conclude
, bearing in mind, the effect of nature
due to
air
traffic
, it is necessary to impose high taxing leads to maintain nature
and control air
traffic
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