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The given table illustrates the trend of the total fast food consumption in
Melbourne
 between three different
year
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years
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 (in 2005, in the present, and its predicted year in 2025). The units are measured by five different types of fast food.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that more people in
Melbourne
 will eat
hamburger
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hamburgers
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 as the
number
 reached a peak in 2025,
whereas
 the
number
 hit a through in 2005 with fried
rice
 and
noodles
.
Morever
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Moreover
, the table
also
 reveals that all fast food types experienced a gradual rise throughout the given period, with the exception of
hamburger
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hamburgers
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that
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which
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 witnessed a slight drop in the present.
To begin
 with, citizens in
Melbourne
 eat
hamburger
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hamburgers
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 by 40 in 2005, the
number
then
 fell moderately to 38 in the present, before it is predicted to rise by 51 in 2025. As for fried chicken, the
number
 stood at 35 at the beginning, it
then
 increased slightly to 37, and the
number
 reached a peak
to
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of
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 45 in 2025. On the other side, salad stood comparatively lower in 2005 with only 5, before it increase
threetimes
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three times
 fold to 15 in the present. Residents in
Melbourne
is
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are
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 predicted to consume salad to 41 in 2025. Regarding fried
rice
 and
noodles
, the
number
more
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is more
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 or less unchanged and remain stable throughout the given period. Fried
rice
 and
noodles
 stood by 6 in 2005,
whereas
 in the present the
number
 changed to 9 and 8, respectively.
Finally
,
Melbourne
's people only eat fried
rice
 and
noodles
 by 9 in 2025.
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